Mugritte
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"Legere ad Ignum"
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Post by Mugritte on Dec 22, 2016 22:31:50 GMT -8
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Post by DukeFluffy on Dec 23, 2016 16:43:26 GMT -8
Great stuff. The-
IN MY HAT! IN YOUR HAT? MY HAT IN YOUR HAT
Is a tad repetitive, but for all I know that's intentional. You also copied the document for formatting which is always a good sign. I like it. Will show to writers.
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Mugritte
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Post by Mugritte on Dec 26, 2016 15:17:51 GMT -8
Thank'ee.
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Post by felineknave on Dec 28, 2016 0:33:09 GMT -8
Hmm, I don't think we're making Gats a flat out deity in game.
Otherwise the dialog here is very solid...I think magic merchant is a guy tho.
Nice job, you do good work on dialogue
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Mugritte
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Post by Mugritte on Dec 28, 2016 8:44:49 GMT -8
Hmm, I don't think we're making Gats a flat out deity in game. Otherwise the dialog here is very solid...I think magic merchant is a guy tho. Nice job, you do good work on dialogue But, who is Gats, perse!? He is not the person you know of, or even a person, or single entity! He is nothing, but he is everything.. PRAISE GATS. Thank you.
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